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Nick Winney's avatar

wow.

what the hell was that... have to read it again now. sometimes its only when you get to the end do you understand the road you just walked to get there.

and wtf is a qliphthoth?

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Keith Long's avatar

Haha yeah this is definitely a twisted tale that unwinds as you go. I learned of Qliphoth from Gravity’s Rainbow I believe — they are from Judaism I believe, and they are an embodiment of evil, literally translating to husk or shell. If you Google the word, lots of interesting stuff comes up.

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Nick Winney's avatar

oh yaaaa

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Simpulacra's avatar

Oooooh I DIG this.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thanks very much!

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The Dread Legacies's avatar

It moves… and moves, never stopping. It breathes with terse but impactful delight. It was fun and the high tension and creativity at every turn drove me to an ambiguous cliff. I loved it. This was great.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank you so much, that means a lot!

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Goodness me. Yeah, I definitely didn't see this one the first time around.

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Keith Long's avatar

Well, glad I caught ya then lol

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Scoot's avatar

I am speechless. This is stunning.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank yooouuuu!!

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