Oh my god. So sinister! that's very tight. not a word wasted there. need to read this several times. HOW did you get only 4th place Keith... it's literally toe curling.
as an aside... i have two maine coons and... well... you wouldnt want that much hair round your backside thats all im saying
Thanks for reading, I’m really glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun shaping the story - the initial idea was pretty different. Might end up doing a separate unrelated story with the original idea.
ahhhhhhggghh... I just noticed the countdown too... genius! keith... it was bad enough without the cat arse thing... that is actually the worst bit... because its the essence of the game of "dare" isnt it... that kids will do anything. and my next horror is going to have a Keith in it doing something vile... oh yes it is! 😆
The gauntlet has been thrown down.... but what could be worse than licking a cats bum hole, Keith....what indeed.... well, you will find out soon enough....soon enough
Thanks very much, the idea started fairly different from the end product. But the first courtroom scene more or less popped into my head fully formed lol then writing it backwards just sort of worked.
Wow, that is tough to read. So well done, honestly.
Thanks very much, it was definitely dark. I wanted to do a story that focused on the dark side of people.
Oh my god. So sinister! that's very tight. not a word wasted there. need to read this several times. HOW did you get only 4th place Keith... it's literally toe curling.
as an aside... i have two maine coons and... well... you wouldnt want that much hair round your backside thats all im saying
Haha agreed about the Maine coons
Thanks for reading, I’m really glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun shaping the story - the initial idea was pretty different. Might end up doing a separate unrelated story with the original idea.
ahhhhhhggghh... I just noticed the countdown too... genius! keith... it was bad enough without the cat arse thing... that is actually the worst bit... because its the essence of the game of "dare" isnt it... that kids will do anything. and my next horror is going to have a Keith in it doing something vile... oh yes it is! 😆
Yeah! I wanted a slightly less subtle way of indicating the structure of the story, so I figured that was one way of doing it haha
Oh good good, I love reposting quotes that feature me saying or doing the craziest things haha
The gauntlet has been thrown down.... but what could be worse than licking a cats bum hole, Keith....what indeed.... well, you will find out soon enough....soon enough
(≖ ͜ʖ≖) lookin’ forward to it.
Great read, thanks. That structure makes it so unnerving and tense.
Thanks very much, the idea started fairly different from the end product. But the first courtroom scene more or less popped into my head fully formed lol then writing it backwards just sort of worked.
I love the way you wrote this, it’s so suspenseful and horrifying. really great work.
Thank you thank you thank! This has been fairly surreal, having so many incredible writers compliment my story haha
Wow! A train wreck I couldn’t look away from! Excellent, taut, and intense - so sleek and murderous.
That is a great description haha Thanks so much for reading, commenting, and restacking - it's the best to get those notifications.