I love the stream-of-consciousness style here and I think keeping all the text together works perfectly. And I can't get the image of the ring in the fish's mouth out of my head. Great story, Keith.
Thanks very much! I also tend to start stories with one specific image in my head haha for this one it was definitely the fish with the ring, though the idea for the recurring fish catch has been bouncing around for a bit now
When I worked in a rehab, I had a few encounters with this level of energy and they are very awkward in the moment but man — total blast to look back on lol
I love the stream-of-consciousness style here and I think keeping all the text together works perfectly. And I can't get the image of the ring in the fish's mouth out of my head. Great story, Keith.
Thanks very much! I also tend to start stories with one specific image in my head haha for this one it was definitely the fish with the ring, though the idea for the recurring fish catch has been bouncing around for a bit now
this is absolutely bat shit crazy! a non stop read! where did you get that idea from... one eyed whisky fish? fucking hell man 😆😆😆
Haha! Yeah it’s probably the weirdest thing I’ve written to date!
I can visualise him smiling with all that raw fish stuck between his teeth! Really loving the weirdness radiating here, Keith. 🤘
Funny you should say that! I was I think channeling you! I’ve been listening through your books and so weirdness was on my mind haha
Hell yeah! I love that! This was such a fun, unique story. To think I played a small role in it existing is really cool. 🍻
What was in the truck??
Do you really wanna know what I pictured ??
Oh yeah. Morbid curiosity.
I imagined him converting the bed of the truck into a fish tank for himself. Possibly to fill with whiskey. Lol
Glub glub! 🐟🥃
I was wondering the same thing!
this is fuckin' cool. not sure if I would be totally freaked out or weirdly interested if this dude came up to me at a bar
When I worked in a rehab, I had a few encounters with this level of energy and they are very awkward in the moment but man — total blast to look back on lol
Oh I bet. I work in a crisis call center, I get a lot of this energy but I'm not sitting at a bar with the voice lol so it's a bit watered down
I'm so glad he didn't stay to find out what was in the back of the truck.
Crazy and creepy. I loved it.
Thank you!! I don’t think I would’ve either lol
damn keith this is great. I love this character’s voice, and the story is so fucked. I love it.
I was reading copious amounts of W.P.III and was feeling weird haha