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Nick Buchheit's avatar

Damn. This hit me in all the feels. Nice work.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank ye kindly! ‘Preciate it

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Andy Futuro's avatar

Deftly executed.

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Keith Long's avatar

thankthankthankthankthankthankthank means a lot coming from you

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Nick Winney's avatar

ooooph. a beautiful twist from anticipated horror to gut wrenching sadness and hope for the redemptive power of a child's naiive love and lack of judgement. really good writing Keith.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thanks! As you say, I swell up with the feedback, and it means just a smidge extra coming from authors who write such A++ stories

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