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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

👏👏👏Love this chapter!

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank you so much! I loved the first two — you and J. made me nervous with how great yours were, but I was excited!

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

No need to be nervous. I loved how you built on what we both wrote and added even more. She's a cool character and I like the twist you added. I really think we should keep this going, and do a Round Robin kind of writing, doing another round of chapters when we get thru the first line of writers. What do you think?

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Keith Long's avatar

I am ALL for it — I love this

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Excellent. I'll reach out to J. Curtis and see what he thinks. :)

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J. Curtis's avatar

Woohoo! You both added so much I hadn’t considered. Stellar writing!

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank you so very very much! Such a cool idea. Wizard concept lol

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𝐂𝐁 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧's avatar

The intensity level just spiked. I ғᴇʟᴛ this one! 👏👏👏

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Keith Long's avatar

Thanks! I tried to leave plenty of open paths for the next authors haha

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Jon T's avatar

Okay now. This is fun.

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Keith Long's avatar

It really is!

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C.S. Mee's avatar

everyone knows I'm clinging to the dad storyline... chapter four: https://open.substack.com/pub/csmee/p/freakshow-chapter-4?r=3v8lws&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web

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Keith Long's avatar

Ah! So excited, reading now

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

This is a fun experiment! Enjoying these chapters.

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Keith Long's avatar

Me too — and each one has the authors flavor to it which is cool

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Pablo Báez's avatar

Anyone’s heard from Paul?

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Keith Long's avatar

I have not

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

This was dope. Glad you shared this, I really gotta read the rest. Get some extra context here but I love what you did. The tension was definitely palpable and the action tight. Extra note, the first line killed

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Keith Long's avatar

Thanks - definitely check out the rest, they're short!

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