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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Oh yes, fantastic! I love how you made sense of this Freakshow/Byleth connection and what that looks like and how it changes her. I could see her prowling the city as a cat and then morphing back into a human. Excellent and fun!

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Keith Long's avatar

tHank you kIndly. i Don't Do this stylE ofteN ;}

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

You should!

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Nick Winney's avatar

i never saw this fingy yet...

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Keith Long's avatar

come on in, the waters fine. radiated, but fine.

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Sandolore Sykes's avatar

I love where you took it, Keith. Excellent rhythm and flow too! This thing has a vibe...

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Keith Long's avatar

thankS vEry muCh, this pRoject has beEn very inTeresting to watch take Shape ;}

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Jennifer James's avatar

This is some beautiful work. It read like you were in quite a flow state when you wrote it.

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Keith Long's avatar

Thank you very much! It was a fairly mad dash of words lol I read the previous chapter to get a feel of character and plot and voice and then just went — seems the best way for some things

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