Hah That's funny, I was worried someone would do it before me because I posted a flash story like 10 months ago using this same concept but hadn't returned to it for lack of a good story to tell lol
Well, at least I hope the guy found a no tolls route, because those can be a pain if you don't budget properly. This may not be a concern for him anymore, but even so.
[But seriously, this was great, and also terrifying, and as much as I am in awe of your work here I am not clicking on any of those links at all.]
Hitting a toll with no cash/coins used to be the true nightmare. [thank you very much — also, I wouldn’t. Maybe that Vice article at the end, because it’s crazy ]
Thank you! I really appreciate that
Thanks for reading! I appreciate the kind words
This was awful, great work. Ugh. The “dentists near me” is when my stomach started dropping.
Haha thanks, Scoot! It was fun to write
Brilliant—allowed my imagination to do the leg work, which is always worse. I do hate when I get those dreams…
I have actually never had a teeth dream that I can recall lol
It’s bc I don’t floss enough
Ummm https://open.spotify.com/track/4nMF6ldS1CelweLlh9OoFt?si=w-Vc5GkHS_q2v3d--s2VQg
.... huh. That's ironic
Tuesday tunes tomorrow in your honor haha
What did you play? Did you sing? What’s happening?
This lore is insane omfg
🤣🤘
Love this so much. Thanks for letting me have an early look!
Thanks a million, especially for the quick turn around!
Oh god 😂🙈 the horror laughs coming out of my mouth during this, well done
Always good stuff but special bravo for the creativity and elbow grease
Thank you kindly
You son of a bitch I’ve been wanting to do something like this but this is way better hahah this rules bro
Hah That's funny, I was worried someone would do it before me because I posted a flash story like 10 months ago using this same concept but hadn't returned to it for lack of a good story to tell lol
Holy crap Keith. I love it. So creative.
Thanks, Shaina - Means a lot to hear
I can only imagine the ads you are being served up after these queries lol.
This was super cool, super fresh, and super creepy, Keith. Loved it!
Yeaaah, all in service of the story lol Thank you
Hoooooooo, boy!
I *loved* reading this so much. I felt like I was watching an extreme unravelling. I could see the person in my mind’s eye - what’s left of him.
Brilliant!
So damn creepy though….
It is funny how vivid something so minimal can be lol thanks a billion!
Oh my god, this is so cool! And awful, and chilling. I love fresh takes on format like this.
Thank you! I love messing around with form, it can really produce some interesting results
Once again you are the king of the creative format! So good. But you might want to clear your search history now. ;)
Thank you thank you! 😄 idk, I kinda like keeping the targeted ads on their toes lol
Well, at least I hope the guy found a no tolls route, because those can be a pain if you don't budget properly. This may not be a concern for him anymore, but even so.
[But seriously, this was great, and also terrifying, and as much as I am in awe of your work here I am not clicking on any of those links at all.]
Hitting a toll with no cash/coins used to be the true nightmare. [thank you very much — also, I wouldn’t. Maybe that Vice article at the end, because it’s crazy ]
This was great. Really creative way to tell a horrifying story. And it started out so innocently.
Thank you very much! All the worst stories always do lol
😬 Yeesh.
🌝yeah lol